Animal Desires

Thrust into this dark well of despair I begin to imagine your beautiful body in my hands. The way your hair cascades down your neck and always smells fresh, a faint perfume lingering in its depths. Your forehead hiding heavy thoughts behind its broad expanse as I give it a fond kiss. Your ears with their rubbery taste, teased by my tongue, making you squirm with erotic delight. Your eyes, mirrors of desire, and gazing at me with that naked look of love that sends a thrill of joy down my spine. I kiss your eye-lids, leaving gentle imprints of my love on the windows to your soul. I rub my nose against yours, uniting our breath for an instant that lasts an eternity. I shift a little and gently trace my tongue over your lips, waiting for the faint quiver. They glisten with raw want. I kiss your mouth, hungrily, my tongue shooting in and searching for yours. There…I found it. And our tongues begin their sensual dance around and over each other, rubbing, rolling, caressing, and squeezing every ounce of emotion. You take my lower lip into your mouth and suck on it, trying to drink in my desire and I reciprocate by taking your lip and tasting the love waiting to explode behind it.

I kiss you again and again, full on your mouth, hungry for you and your body. My hands move all over your soft body wanting to greedily touch everything at once. You pull my head back and latch on to my mouth, thrusting your tongue in, wanting to pour what you feel into me. Like meteors shooting across the sky we burn with fire and desire.

My lips travel down your neck, breathing in deeply your basic smell, kissing it lightly, blowing my warm breath along its sinuous curve. I find your breasts, my fountains of desire. They glow with an inner light, the light of passion wanting to be touched and felt. My mouth envelops them one after the other. My tongue hungrily sucks on your nipples and feels them going taut. You squirm and moan, your eyes watching my mouth work magic with your body. I go on, wanting more and more, rolling your erect nipples over my tongue, kneading your other breast with my free hand. I travel down your body, tracing my tongue along the long highway between your breasts and your darkest depths, I linger along your belly-button, exploring its shallows, and I examine with the edge of my tongue the contours of your stomach and the twisting curves of your pelvis. Your sighs increase in momentum as I near my destination. The pressure of your fingers on my hair increases by that small amount. And I reach home.

The well spring of your desire and the playground of my dreams. I run my tongue along the outlines, gauging the wet heat emanating from your center. I prolong it, to tease you. I linger and linger along the outer edges while you stare down at me with a fierce hunger in your eyes, wanting to urge me on but failing to find the words for it. I take pleasure in watching your frustration grow and just when you are about to shout I thrust my tongue in. Instantly, I’m enveloped in your basic smells, in the searing heat, and the raw raw taste of you. I lick and suck to all my hearts content. I search for the spots which will melt you like butter and concentrate on them, the thick mound of flesh just on the outer edge, and the upper part on the inside edge. Your voice is high-pitched now, your eyes are closed and your hands are holding on tight to my head as if you are afraid that you will take off into the air. A hot flush runs through your body and normal senses desert you. You are on the threshold of another world, a world where lust and desire are your masters.

Suddenly, I stop. You are slow to notice it, your eyes open up reluctantly and look at me, confused. I smirk with the happiness of the one in control and return a look of disarming innocence. You realize that I’m up to my old games again. Without further ado you plead with your eyes and pull on my hair with mounting frustration. I would like to extend this little game but today I’ll indulge you. So I go back to what I was doing. I kiss your mound and suck on that little overhang. It is time now to go into the highest gear. Faster and faster I thrust my tongue, in and out. In and out. Your legs are thrashing around me. I hold them with my hands but my tongue does not stop. I go deeper if it was possible to go any deeper. You flail your hands and try to pull me off. But I cannot be stopped now. I go mad with my own desire and try to plumb your depths with my shooting softness.

In that instant you explode. Like an underwater volcano your raging depths release their contents and drench my mouth with nature’s purest juices. You shudder and thrash. You shake and pant. Your moans reach a crescendo which no soprano can ever match. You are in that world now where words do not exist. You experience the purest pleasure possible, untrammeled by any physical boundary. You are one with the elements.

I watch all of this silently, taking pleasure in having given you such sublime joy. You return to your senses, slowly. We disengage gently and stare at each other. We share the unparalleled bliss of fulfilled desire, reveling in the warm glow of our bodies entwined like thread in cloth.

20 responses to “Animal Desires”

  1. lorena says:

    WOOOOOOWWW!!! i need to smoke a cigarrete after this πŸ˜‰ damn! πŸ™‚ ha ha!
    beautiful, sultry, sensual writing. very sexy.
    now 2 great erotica writers, wonderful. great way to end my friday! thanks πŸ™‚

  2. transience says:

    capital! i have no words. i wrote my first erotica because of cocaine jesus, too. he is the best.

  3. paddy says:

    now thats what i call passion..

  4. gulnaz says:

    phew!!!!! need a tall chilled glass of water after that!!! you are indeed a worthy disciplie of the great master CJ! πŸ™‚

  5. Soulless says:


    Throat parched.




  6. gulnaz says:

    btw, forgot to congratulate you on the new look of your blog, i like it.

  7. anil says:

    lorena: lol!..my..my did my words have such an effect? I’m amazed…here I was twiddling my thumbs nervously wondering whether I had got it right or had it slipped into porno territory! almost deleted it as soon as I put it up actually…I cannot tell you how much your comment relieved me! *hug* thank you…

    transience: gee…thanks! I know…he is damn good…wish he wrote more…it is nice to see that he has decided to write again…this post was actually written to mark the end of his blog…but then after writing I realized that he had decided to write again..

    paddy: *smiles*

    gulnaz & soulless: *grins wickedly* perhaps I should try this on some innocent woman…and thank you…I try…

    geetanjali: *smiles back*

    gulnaz: oh thanks a lot…I like it a lot but I’m still not sure whether I’ll stick with it…am thinking the backgrnd is a lil too dark…what do you think?

  8. yvaine says:

    Damn. Where’s a cigarette when you need one?

    Beautiful. Explosive (literally and figuratively). LOVELY.

  9. Jai says:

    I would be amazed if it really was fiction.

  10. stella says:

    w.o.w. i’m still catching my breath. suddenly it feels very hot in here.

  11. gulnaz says:

    yes, the gray is darker than it should be here.
    i like the central part though. maybe you could try to make the central part large or use the green pic bar at the top more. i’m sure you will get it right πŸ™‚

  12. anil says:

    yvaine and stella:*grins and takes a bow*

    Jai: hey welcome here….and (*poker faced*)…no comments…

    gulnaz: you put in words what I was thinking…lets see…I’ll change certain things…hopefully they will work…and thanks for your feedback…

  13. diva says:

    Dude, let me try n breathe first…..that was mind blowing!!

  14. teleute says:

    nice. very nice.



  15. anil says:

    diva: heeelo my boy! what are you doing here..sneaking on me like this? but thank you…cant believe that I had that kind of an effect on you *winks*!

    teleute: *grins innocently*…thank you…

  16. finnegan says:

    Jai, this is not fiction. Nor is it “porno light”.—it’s called: “friction”.

    Anil, you’ve got all the girls hot in here. I can’t see past all the steam to type!

    After reading this I think I want to be a woman. There’s more “there” there.

    But at least I’ve got my cut-rate male nipples to get hardened. Whooee, they’re standing up and saluting like soldiers!

  17. anil says:

    finnegan: rofl!….can’t say anything more…still laughing like hell!

  18. Pincushion says:

    Gosh! phew! how did i miss this..
    damn! i can’t say what i want right now..LOL..but u sure can guess!!!
    yeah..i need that cigarette too πŸ˜‰

  19. Anil says:

    pincushion: ah, but you found it in the end! *grins* even I’m at a loss for words…but let me just whisper thank you!

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