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Exordium III

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I wanted
To talk aloud
So I kissed my fingers

Now
You can see
The whispers they weave
From the threads of love and pain, again

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2 responses to “Exordium III”

1. Nasra Al Adawi says:

   July 11, 2005 at 9:42 am

   I enjoyed reading this one

   I wanted
   To talk aloud
   So I kissed my fingers
   Now
   You can see
   The whispers they weave
   From the threads of love and pain, again

   However I would have thought you should have said:

   I wanted
   To talk aloud
   So I kissed your fingers
   Now
   You can see
   The whispers they weave
   From the threads of love and pain, again

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2. anil says:

   July 12, 2005 at 10:36 am

   Nasra: hmm…interesting thought that…it does flow visually when you join them up but then I guess I separated them bcos each verse talks abt a new thing….

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