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Cyberoptic

These keys
That I tap
For sonic delight
And literary sunlight
Produce packets
Of ancient lore
Covered by cobwebs of thought-bore
I blow away
The colluding threads
With the breath of my dreams
So do you see them now?
Lilac-colored tales
From the digital entrails
Of the cyberoptic underground

11 responses to “Cyberoptic”

  1. . : A : . says:

    I see them now … 🙂

  2. gulnaz says:

    hey thats clever and cute too! 😉

  3. lorena says:

    very fluid…one of those i like to read out loud…..”with the breath of my dreams” sounds mysterious to me. great poem.

  4. transience says:

    a mix of technology and romance in poetry. original yet not heavy-handed. well done!

  5. dancing_starz(richa) says:

    Mmm…Lilac colored tales…sounds nostalgic.

  6. pincushion says:

    hey thats a very unusual combo..a metallic body with a soft human heart! loved the ‘literary sunlight’ and ‘lilac coloured tales’ 🙂

  7. anil says:

    :A: *smiles*

    gulnaz, lorena and transience: thank you very much..

    dancing_starz: a warm welcome to you..and I’d love to visit you if you can leave a link behind…hmm…actually it was not about nostalgia…more about cyber-cool…

    pincushion: you know what…of all you got very close to what I had meant to convey with this poem…thank you!

  8. finnegan says:

    I really like this one. I read it aloud and it sounded fairytale-like. A sprite should read it. A digital one.

  9. anil says:

    finnegan: thank you…a digital sprite is very appropriate for this actually!

  10. Funky nostalgia and cyber imagination — all in one! Wow!!

  11. anil says:

    Anonymous Poet: *smiles* an apt description that…thank you…

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